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motormouth
02-15-2004, 10:31 PM
Hi

I have had my website for just over a year take a look any comments will be appreacted.

I am working on updating all the pages so they have a link bar like the homepage does and also doing some work to the links page and the forum.

trackerm
02-16-2004, 12:02 PM
Hi :)

Well done on your website. Very informative.
I do have a suggestion:

You are promoting a company that supplies fireworks, and you have some photos of your products.
However none of the products shown are in the post-wick-lit-exploding stage!!!
Unlit firework photos are pretty boring, so how about selling the “sizzle” as a marketing person would tell you.
I would recommend getting a professional photographer to have a night of fun and frivolity with your product. Perhaps taking some fast action photos of one firework and making a gif of it.
We buy your type of product to get a bang out of our celebrations, so show us what we can expect :)

This site may be way too difficult to build, but if you could have you this type of graphic with real pics of your fireworks you would be on a winner http://www.fireworks.com/default_flash.asp
Your Statcounter would be blasted through the roof!
All the best
:)

Oh, by the way, product photos of long cylindrical objects are hard to do well as there is always too much background. A professional photographer though expensive would be worth the bucks.

Mark

Blueberry
02-19-2004, 06:46 PM
Yes, a bit more colour and more effort on the layout of the website wouldn't hurt either. You've got the content, now give it a nice dressing up.

pink_cloud
02-21-2004, 05:50 AM
i agree with blueberry
more colour! :p
but yeah, very informative ^_^